Burge McCall

Burge McCall is a very un attractive man. (Start a new sentence) he is short, hairy and fat, but he thinks he is the most handsome man in town.He wears (a) fur coat and smokes cigars. He behaves really disrespectfully to his wife, and usually goes out with other women and spends all his money on them, instead of his wife. His wife, Mrs. McCall,  is really quiet and its(gr.) looks like she is used to Mr. McCall's behavior. 

In the beginning of the story, there is a description of the couple, which gives us a background 

about(ww. - of) the couple's relationship, which is an(מיותר) extremely irregular. Though he isn't really an attractive man, he is a guy who dates whoever he wants whenever he wants and doesn't owe (an) explanation to his wife. His wife, on the other hand, is really an attractive woman, and its not really clear why is she(wo.) married to Burge. He is doing(gr.) everything to upset her - he calls her names, acting(gr.) disrespectfully to her and so on. At some point she gets really tired of him and decides to do something really smart - she goes to the drug store and tells the seller to tell Burge that she has bought 10 pounds of rat-poison. Her trick success(ww.). When Burge comes to the drug store, the seller tells him: "I don't understand why did(מיותר) your wife buy(gr. - bought) 10 pounds of rat-poison...". From that moment, Burge McCall was so frightened from the thought that his wife is(gr.) planning to kill him with that poison, that he starts(gr.) to act to her(מיותר) respectfully. Suddenly, he becomes a good husband, takes her to a romantic picnic, stops calling her names and stops dating other women, he does everything to prevent her from thoughts of killing him. 

To conclude, I think that this relationship is really the oposite(sp.) to(מיותר) how I see a relation between a husband and his wife. Any(ww. - No) husband should not(מיותר) behave or treat his wife like Burge does. This is a very bad and negative example of (a) relationship between a married couple. About their conduct I think that they both were wrong in the way of behavior they chose. If Mrs. McCall suffered from Burge's behaviour, she had to divorce from(מיותר) Burge, especially when she knew he doesnt(gr.) love her at all. and regard(ing)  to(מיותר) Burge('s) conduct, I think that he had to divorce from(מיותר) his wife and not to fake his behaviour and the whole marriage just to save his own life.   

You worked hard, and it turned out quite good, although you have some work to do.
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Daphna